The Late Message That Came Early – Part 1
I sipped on a hot cup of tea, reclining on my chair staring through the window, occasionally glancing to the right. The television was running across the hallway. Apparently Donald Trump had been elected for a second term after a successful four-year ‘reign’, as I grew to call it. Some people just wanna watch the world burn. I continued enjoying the sights through the window, the sun setting into the horizon, the birds returning to their nests, back to their loving families. Slowly the sky was turning red, in contrast to the green of the countryside, but today it was somehow working and I found it immensely beautiful.
I quit my extremely lucrative job and moved to the
countryside a month ago, tired of the hectic city life and needing a break to
work on a book that I began a long time back. Despite being here for a few
weeks, I did not expect to come up short in the creative side. The words just
did not come like they used to. Twelve years in corporate had probably
turned me too rusty in that department. Perhaps the idea that happened upon me
many years ago was not meant to be. I was just not the same person now. But new
ideas hadn’t yet found its way into my head and I just couldn’t figure out what
to write about.
So there I was stuck both physically and mentally in the
middle of nowhere. I had paid a good sum of money for this old cottage with ivy
growing on its walls all the way to the roof; something I have always dreamed
of from all the Enid Blyton novels I had read in my early teens. I have always
wanted to live in an old place, like Kirrin Cottage from the Famous Five
novels, living life with my cousins and friends, going on little adventures
with a dog. But as I grew, I realized life is not as easy as it seems. Everyone
is busy with their lives. These days, I rarely see my cousins. Friends have
gone by and new ones seem to pop up every few years. Yet it is very hard on the
heart when a close friend you had spent a half of your life with eventually
lose touch with you. Ahh… Memories. Always brings a tear to my eyes. At least
I have my canine friend who I have named Timothy after the famous Timmy and
like a telepathic call, there he was standing in front of me, ball in his
mouth, brimming with excitement for his evening walk. I obliged.
We came back late into the evening. Night was falling and
here, without the phenomenon of light pollution, I would be able to actually
see the milky way with my eyes. The city people have no idea what they are
missing. But today there were no stars. Grey clouds of mist were quickly trailing
across the sky. A storm was brewing and I had to get inside.
Storms are when you miss the company of people. I had to stay
near the fireplace to keep my feet warm. Timmy was close by resting, sharing
his warmth with me. I had a book open in my arms, but I was not reading it; my
mind was elsewhere. Procrastination can take you back in time, almost like time
travel.
I was desperately lost in my thoughts when I heard the loud
crack, like that of a huge whip. Lightning had struck one of the walls of the
cottage. I quickly grabbed my umbrella, put on my boots and went outside to see
the damage. The light from my torch showed me that the thick outer wall around bedroom upstairs had broken
down completely and a huge crevice showed its dark head. The wall was hollow, probably to save brick. The first thought that
raced through my head was the damage this was gonna cost to my bank account,
which hadn’t seen an increase since last month. Suddenly Timmy started barking.
I looked at where he was staring at and my eyes fell upon an object, grey in
colour inside the crevice. As I watched, it slid on the broken walls and fell to the ground. I cautiously went near it. It was shaped like a huge
elongated egg almost eight feet from top to bottom and almost a metre across in
diameter at its thickest. It had dirt and grime all over it and I realized this
had been inside the walls for a very long time, hidden from the outside world. I
prayed to God that this was not a coffin or sarcophagus of ancient times.
I
looked closely at the middle and I saw a strange marking, almost like the palm
of a hand, but weirdly drawn. I couldn’t control myself. I put the torch down
and I rested my palm on the marking. The reaction was imminent. With a loud
click, the object split from the middle and smoke started to rise from the
opening and I moved back.
Without warning, something thrust forward from the inside
and Timmy started barking again. I couldn’t see what it was in the dark. I
cautiously went near it. A sudden flash of lightning lit the entire sky and I
jumped. Not because of the light, but because I was face to face with a decayed
corpse. From the looks of it, it had been there for a long time, decades in
fact, because that wall had probably been there since the very beginning.
Another flash lit the skies again, this time longer and I
could read the inscriptions on the chair beneath the corpse and my entire body
froze.
John 117 - Date of Departure: 18:15, 21st
February 2102
And on cue, thunder started to rumble with the
elating beats of my heart and a single thought raced through my head, chilling me to the bottom of my spine: 'A Time Traveller'!!!
To be Continued... (Update) Go toThe Late Message That Came Early Part 2 to read the rest of the story😉
Sorry people... Hope that was an interesting read but unfortunately that's it for today. Ever come across an experience where you decide to write a story and words keep coming out and they dont stop??? Yeah... That happened and eventually I had a 2000+ word 'short' story and it wasnt even over yet. So I decided to split it into two parts. I'll definitely post it tomorrow.
Give me reviews in the comment section and also suggestions for the future. It helps me become better at what I do... So thank you for reading and keep supporting, keep sharing. Have a great weekend. Peace!
Nice one bro ..
ReplyDeleteBut little bit elaborated I think. Don't end up in 2 episodes. Think differently and make something which gives curiosity in reader's mind.
Thanks man... I know its a bit elaborate. But the entire story is even bigger. Thats why i had to split into two. Hope you like. The second part gets sciency😜
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DeleteOK cool..
DeleteWaiting for the next part..
I have seen some different versions of time travel in movies(if that is the theme and the incidence happened so far is not a mirage!!).Eagerly waiting to see your version of the story. that was an interesting end...curious to know how it finish from here..keep up the good work...will give you my humble suggestions after you complete the story
ReplyDeleteYes! You are right. I was going for time travel. Glad you liked it. The second part is coming soon. I'll definitely let you know😊
DeleteGreat. Waiting for next episode.
ReplyDeleteThanks... I'll let you know once I'm done
DeleteIt's a good plot...interval 'twist' was good😉...hope the 2nd part would be more interesting... Great use of language👌
ReplyDeleteThanks man! 'Interval' twist... I liked that😂. The second part is coming soon. Do support.🤗
DeleteIt's awsm. Can't wait for the next episode. Hope it would arrive soon.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the comment Riya🤗. I'm not sure but I think you know a version of this story from back in school😉. I'll let you know once the second part is done.
DeleteSorry that I could comment only aftr a week..This part is archetypal and stirring..The way you injected Enid Blyton, Famous give series were coherent and, I could get a complete idea of the character from the detailing.To convey it, requires a special skill and u have invented that.Great use of language..'Procrastination xan take u bak in time, almost like tym travel'-gud thought..Keep up..
ReplyDeleteHeyy. No need for any sorrys. Glad you liked it. You are right. Character building does take a lot of time and words. Makes the reader relate to the character. Thanks for the support😊
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