The Late Message That Came Early – Part 2
If you've not yet read the first part, what are you waiting for!!! Go to The Late Message That Came Early Part 1 to read it. Don't read the second part before (Spoilers beware)
I opened my eyes two days later, dreaming about the object. I got off the bed hoping that the events since that fateful stormy night were a dream. Everything about it felt like one for the things that happened since did not have a rational explanation. It questioned everything I knew and understood about the world so far. I hadn’t told the authorities the entire truth. A solitary man living in the middle of nowhere, a corpse from a secret place inside the walls… Sounds like the opening to a serial killer's story. I didn’t want law enforcement and media inside either. But there was yet another reason for all this secrecy and I thought about events of the last two nights for the thousandth time.
I opened my eyes two days later, dreaming about the object. I got off the bed hoping that the events since that fateful stormy night were a dream. Everything about it felt like one for the things that happened since did not have a rational explanation. It questioned everything I knew and understood about the world so far. I hadn’t told the authorities the entire truth. A solitary man living in the middle of nowhere, a corpse from a secret place inside the walls… Sounds like the opening to a serial killer's story. I didn’t want law enforcement and media inside either. But there was yet another reason for all this secrecy and I thought about events of the last two nights for the thousandth time.
After I found out where or apparently 'when' the object came
from, I wanted to know more. I started hunting for information and I found what
looked like a duffel bag hanging from the chair where John’s body lay. I took
it from its hook and opened it. In it, there were a few stacks of paper, neatly
arranged. I kept it aside making a mental note to examine it in the light and
looked for more information. The inside of the object was bare save for a few
screens and buttons that lined the doors, probably controls. I tried pressing
the buttons. None of them worked. The screens were done for. After a few
minutes of vain work, I concluded that the object was indeed dead, like its
owner. There was nothing more to find. I tried closing the two halves. That
worked and the object was whole once again with a loud click. I covered it with
tarp and went inside the house.
I called for Timmy and dried him up. He was silent for the
whole time. Perhaps it is true what they say. Maybe dogs really are telepathic.
They seem to understand the exact emotions of their human companion. Or it
could be the fact that he just got scared.
Jokes aside, I grabbed the ‘bag from the future’ and examined
it in the light. It was made of some synthetic material that I couldn’t recognise.
Inside it the papers were safe. The ones towards the bottom were plans and
schematics. I picked the one on top and started reading. It was a letter addressed
arbitrarily.
“Dear Reader,
If you’re reading this, then it means I am dead and maybe
many years have passed. I am writing this before I lose my sanity. I have lost
all hopes of survival but I pray to God that these notes finds the light of day
before it’s too late.
Firstly, I am John Grayson, Expedition Code 117. I am from the year 2102 and was ordered to prevent a major
catastrophe that happened in the past, or specifically on the 28th
of November in the year 2020. On that day, the Vogtle Nuclear plant that was set up
at Georgia in the year 2017 became unstable and it ended up in a massive explosion.
The radiation fall from this set up another chain of nuclear explosions that
eventually resulted in an extinction level incident. The death toll rose in the range of billions and those who survived suffered generations of radiation
poisoning. By our calculations, human beings as a species was going to into extinction by 2150.
I was sent here to prevent this from ever happening. It was
the result of almost 50 years of research and toil and we used up almost all of
our resources for this. During my travel to the past the explosion of 2020 screwed up the
systems and I went much backward than expected. I got sent back by
a century to the year 1920. And worse. I couldn’t move my machine at all. It
was stuck inside a structure. We had failed to account for space. This place
did not have a recorded structure for centuries, part of the reason why we
chose this desolate place as our destination. And here I am thinking who ever wants
a house in the middle of nowhere! But it is as said in Murphy’s Law. "Anything that can go wrong will go wrong!"
Unfortunately, I don’t think there is going to be a second
attempt. So it’s up to whoever you are to save the world. There are the plans
of the reactor in the bag describing what exactly goes wrong. Please do whatever it takes to prevent this from happening.
The future of the whole word literally rests in your hands,
whoever you are. I hope this message reaches the right hands before it’s too
late.
It’s all up to you now. May luck be on your side.
Hopefully,
John 117
PS: I am definitely not going to survive here. So do give me
a decent burial once all this is over. And please keep my machine a secret. It won’t
do the world any good if everyone is out to change their destinies.”
If my eyes could fall off their sockets, they would have!
Every hair on my body was shaking and I looked at today's date: November 21, 2020.
The event was going to happen in a week and the only person left in the planet
who knew it was going to happen was me. Everything rested on my hands and for a
few minutes, I had no idea what to do. I have to travel. No! I needed to call
people. No! I needed to alert the world… And cause major panic. No way.
Slowly my corporate conditioned brain took my thoughts into
rein and ideas and solutions started forming in my head. I had contacts. I
could ask them to be discreet. But I’d have to meet them in person.
I booked the only flight that went to Georgia that day and
safe to say, I got there in time unlike my unsung friend. I got in touch with my contact and to everybody’s
surprise there, I was right. One the reactors was going beyond critical, becoming unstable and the sensors were not
picking it up. If someone hadn’t interfered, it might have gone off. I was lucky enough to have arrived a few days before it went off. I am glad I didn't wait around to get that 'saved at the last moment', like in the movies...
“There was no telling the extent of damage such a
catastrophe would have caused. How did you know this?”, my good friend asked
over dinner, a few hours later.
And I replied with a smile, “I can’t tell you… But it goes
with the fact that I’m psychic”.
My friend laughed, “Fine… Keep it to yourself. You’ve not
changed at all after all these years. Frankly, I was surprised to get your
call. It’s been too long”.
“You know, you’re the same too. Never ever change, my dear friend. Listen to
people no matter how dumb they might sound. Without you, there world might not
have been the same”.
We had a great time catching up. I was happy to have my friend back in my life again. We parted promising to keep
in touch.
So there I was, home after two sleepless days of excitement,
back where it all began. Things were looking up. I had fulfilled my silent
promises to John. Today he lays in my garden inside his machine facing the
rising sun. His gravestone reads, ‘John Grayson; Born in 2070 and Died in 1920.
“Here lies the man, the world will never know, but is the reason every living
being on the planet exists today”’.
Most people are probably gonna take this as a joke if they
ever see it and get a good laugh over it, but I know and maybe in the future, I
might tell someone and they’ll know about this unsung hero.
A week later, I was hanging out in the garden near John’s
resting place and I felt free, my mental blocks nowhere to be seen. I took my laptop and started writing. A new
novel. A better story. A tale of mystery, suspense, action and little bit of
time travel. I had the best story to tell. This was my destiny.
The evening echoed with the clicking sounds of my
keyboard and as the sun set again into the horizon, a faint voice from inside the
ground started speaking. I was too lost in my story to listen to it. The voice
said, “Power source recharged. Set Destination”
The End
So... There you go! The second part of 'The Late Message That Came Early'. Hope you had fun reading it. I didn't want to go into detail because it was already too long!!! But this is the story that I had imagined. I tried to fill up the loose ends from the first part. Do correct me if you find plot holes or mistakes. I would love to hear your opinion.
Until next time, people. Have a great weekend. Peace
Sorry guys... I went a bit overboard with the length. I'll try to be short with the upcoming posts. Give me a pass for this one๐ ๐ ๐
ReplyDeleteGreat story that teaches you patience is Frieden :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. Well! I didn't intend to teach patience, but yeah... If you learned it. Wonderful. Keep supporting!
DeleteWhile i was going through the story,i really was trying to picturize the whole details like there occur in a movie...i have a feeling that you can convert this to a novel detailing the thought process of the narrator as well..the end part is a little confusing.is the narrator himself setting up for time travel..?(by the last set of words given in quotes)..correct me if i'm wrong.by the way nice way to express your version of 'time travel' which sometimes need a little bit of mind work to get what actually the writer(you buddy...) intent to tell.
ReplyDeleteI found one quote really interesting in the story saying..'listen to people no matter how dumb they sound'.may be that's true..keep up the good work dear๐๐
That was a really good analysis. Glad you liked it. "convert this to a novel"? To be honest it did cross my mind. There was a week left for the narrator to act. A week full of espionage, suspense and action. That might work, but not in a blog. That's why I had to wind up the story rather abruptly. You were spot on with writing about time travel. I realise it IS complicated!!!.
DeleteThanks for the comment man. Your support is immensely appreciated!!!
Excellent Krishnu
ReplyDeleteThank you ๐
DeleteReally nice and intresting story....
ReplyDeleteThanks. Glad you liked it
DeleteGreat work dude... Definitely u can make it a novel...the way u explained gave me a decent picturization of the story(u can even develope a script on this)... Anyway gud wrk bro...keep them coming ๐
ReplyDeleteThank you. Glad you liked it. Novel? Haha Maybe but time, brother, is something we dont control. Hopefully sometime in the future๐
Deletegood job Gova......like said by many, you gave a better picturization
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DeleteThat was good read Krishnu chetta. The first half was very thrilling. I really liked the part where he finds out who the corpse really is.
ReplyDeleteI think the second part can be bit more longer. You could have described the reactor and the things involved in more detail. But I loved the ending!
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Heyyy. Glad you liked it. There's more coming. The second part could be longer but in a blog that can get rather tiring to read. Thats why the ending is abrupt.
DeleteKeep supporting and keep smiling (you know what I'm talking about๐)
The complete story made my day..haha..It's a lil complicated, I agree..But you give us space to think..As everyone feels, I think u hav a bent for writing novels..This one was really cool.The time travel concept is already in air..But I get what works inside that lil brain of yours..Keep going..Waiting for more..
ReplyDeleteHaha. Writing about time travel gets my head whirring๐. Im going for solid characters next time. Keep reading and definitely keep it blooming๐ค
DeleteTBH, First part had some solid suspense and imagination.. But the second part felt like written in a hurry.. U rushed with the details to such an extent that the two parts don't look like parts of one story.. Could have written a few more parts instead of rushing with the climax... And i really liked the first part.. you've got some real style ...
ReplyDeleteI agree. Honestly, it was not written in a hurry. But I did cut a lot of story because the second part became too long. The original draft for part 2 turned out to be more than 2500 words. That felt too long. It does feel rushed, but i feel that is better than weary reading :)
DeleteThanks da... Hope to see your support in the upcoming posts as well.
DeleteAnd yeah.. Keep working on those awesome shorts of yours.